In every Hersey's kiss a decadent treasure awaits hidden behind a silver robe. When gently unwrapping the shimmering foil, a brown jewel appears. When the kiss is placed into your watering mouth, it dissolves into a puddle of sweet gooey chocolate.
I love your metaphor of a silver robe. My mouth waters as I read your description. Just watch that you place a comma after your introductory clause (after mouth and before it). :) SBS
I love your metaphor of a silver robe. My mouth waters as I read your description. Just watch that you place a comma after your introductory clause (after mouth and before it). :) SBS
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